"The inmate"
tik.tik.tik.tik. Time is dragging on
I watch the red arm going 'round and sigh
Twelve O'clock now gone
I'm trapped in my own my own sad lie
I watch the red arm going 'round and sigh
I wonder if my mind can bear
I'm trapped in my own my own sad lie
How on earth can this be "fair"?
I wonder if my mind can bear
When this ends? I do not know
How on earth can this be "fair"?
I would think it's better down bellow
When this ends? I do not know
Twelve O'clock now gone
I would think it's better down bellow
tik.tik.tik.tik. Time is dragging on
Title: The inmate
Style of poem: Pantoum
Inspiration: Being trapped in any situation. It was originally me not having an idea and counting the minutes until the end of the day but I exaggerated it (greatly) to make it about the life of a prison inmate.
I really like the ending sentence and how you described how slow the time is going for the inmate who thinks it is unfair that he is imprisoned. Very well done!
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